Monday, July 11, 2016
Discussion about Mistakes - week 2
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What have you learned from today's dicussion about mistakes? Pick 2 examples. Tell us why you choose them. How will you use them later? Include example senteces.
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ReplyDeleteI learned that never use passive where I can use active. Using passive in writing sentence sometimes are longer and harder to understand. It help me to write paragraph better and reduce some mistakes. And I studied "instead of" this word, it is a adverb. And I can use this word to make a sentence. This is my sentence. I like playing basketball instead of doing homework. I think that this word is new word to me. Now, I can use this word to gain better grades.
ReplyDeleteIn today's discussion, I learned that we have to add a "that" between the noun and the clause when we write a noun clause. I cloose the mistake from number 4 is because I didn't notce the mistake this morning and I thought it was fine without "that" which was also a mistake. I will pay attention to this case when I write articles with subordinate clauses in the future. Another thing I have learned is that which are the better words go together with money. We better use "make","earn","use"with money instead of "get". I will be careful with the collocation when I talk or write something with money in the future.
ReplyDeleteEric
good Eric. but what about adjectives clause? you can delete "that" or you can not.
DeleteGreat. You explain these mistakes which you make completely.
DeleteI will pay attention to adjective clause. I can make it change.
Delete1-"In the past, people were different" I learned from this discussion to use capital letters in the beginning of the sentences, and focus on the plural and singular.
ReplyDelete2-"People need to make money" I learned from this discussion to use of the specific verb.
Great. Do you learned more now ?
DeleteNice，did you learned a lot？
DeleteThat sounds nice! You did a good job! Do not forgot to use it while you speaking English or writing !
DeleteYes, I learned a lot
DeleteI studied that the sentences have different structures for example the past tense or the passive. And I knew about the sentences structures when we are checking the sentences. And we also knew how to put the noun clause on the sentences which are more clear to explain the sentences.
ReplyDeleteGreat. Do you can write a good paragraph now ?
DeleteFirst of all , i've learned about Mistakes in sentences .. how to make a good sentence , how to skim word to make sure that the setence it's correct ..
ReplyDeleteGood. Can you use none clause？
DeleteGreat question! What do you think Stephane? Btw, Jay could you change your name to English please? Thanks! :)
DeleteI think that it's could better , to read every evening before to sleep.
DeleteI learned today about how to fix the mistakes in the sentence to make it understandable and clear for the reader. Also I learned how do you put the structure's on the sentence by the right way.
ReplyDeletegreat Talal. Do you have these mistakes before?
DeleteGreat question. What do you think Talal? Btw, Abdul, could you change your name to English please? Thanks!
DeleteToday I learned some things from today's mistakes in the sentence.
ReplyDelete1. I must use "that" between the noun clause and the independent clause in the writing, but I don't need to do it in the speaking. For example, I learned that the "instead of" is a prep. phrase.
2. I learned that the "instead of" is a prep. phrase, and I can use the word "replace" to replace the "instead of"! For example, the technology will replace workers.
You did a good job, li.But do not forgot the second example that teacher told us. Tring to make a simple sentence is important and good!
DeleteSo , could you make a good sentence ? On each steps that you put.
DeleteYou are right!
DeleteI learned that "instead of" is not a verb, we can not use it via a verb. For example, The book will instead of computer. That is wrong, The correct sentence is "The book will replace computer". In addition, Making a sentence usually should be more short and simple. That is the usually hobbit that Americans did. For example, I want to be given a gift by myself. The correct way is "I want to give myself a gift" That is the transfer from passive to active. That is more simple and easier.
ReplyDeleteOne think that I learned in class from this sentences S" The technology will replace him and he may lose his job" . When I write sentences with modal, I must have my verb after modal infinitive verb. Other think that I learned in class from this sentences " some people think that they can plan to work in the same field". If I use noun closes, I must have that in my sentences. I choose these examples because I am always using modal and noun closes with these mistakes. Now I can use model and noun closes correctly in my sentences. For example, students think that they might not have homework every day.
ReplyDeletesorry I mean noun clause.
DeleteAs a summary, most students main idea is about "instead of" and "replace" .In addition, a lot of students learned how to use that between noun clause and independent clause . That seems great! We learned a lot things!
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